Accuracy - 4 Insight - 2. Your sentence doesn't introduce anything that the reader wouldn't have picked up already. We know that she is death and we know of her conversation and demeanor. Pick out some specifics of those things and elaborate on them. Clarity- 3. Again, be more specific.
Accuracy- 5 Insight- 2 Clarity- 2. Is the beggar woman a symbol of death merely because of her interaction with the moon, or are there other aspects that portray her symbolization of death?
insight:5
ReplyDeleteaccuracy:5
clarity:6
Accuracy - 4
ReplyDeleteInsight - 2. Your sentence doesn't introduce anything that the reader wouldn't have picked up already. We know that she is death and we know of her conversation and demeanor. Pick out some specifics of those things and elaborate on them.
Clarity- 3. Again, be more specific.
Accuracy- 5
ReplyDeleteInsight- 2
Clarity- 2. Is the beggar woman a symbol of death merely because of her interaction with the moon, or are there other aspects that portray her symbolization of death?
insight: 5
ReplyDeleteAccuracy: 5
Clarity: 5