Sunday, February 26, 2012
Journal #6
The first thing i did to revise my paper was to rewrite the first paragraph. I tried to make it a bit more interesting and have it catch the readers attention more. I also added more description to each of the paragraphs to try to copy what Hurston does. I made some minor changes to the dialect in order to make it easier to read. One of the big things i saw in my paper was that the sentences didn't really flow together very well, so i when and changed the structure of most of the sentences. This would make the entire paper easier for the eyes to read. With the ending of the pastiche i rewrote the ending because it didn't feel like it did anything to support the theme. And finally i went through and attempted to strengthen the literary terms used. Hopefully they are easier to pick out in the pastiche.
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